I am writing a book
where you exist in pages,
ones I want to tear off
incinerate, erase it,
take chapters that mention you
find the will to write replacements,
but I won’t.
I won’t, because
this story is mine,
you’re a half-written character
and I, ran out of time,
and though the pain
of plotting your course
is gray and unrelenting,
I’ll let you stay the same because
this story is mine;
and you aren’t enough to change
the ending.
November 15th, 2016 at 3:29 pm
“You’re a half written- character and I ” love this lines so much , you pinned well 👍
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November 15th, 2016 at 3:31 pm
Thank you!
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November 15th, 2016 at 5:50 pm
“You aren’t enough to change the ending.” This is so good. Nobody’s worth changing the ending of your story except you! This is very well written!
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November 15th, 2016 at 9:16 pm
I loved this so much. God damn.
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November 17th, 2016 at 12:15 pm
Im so glad! Thank you 🙂
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November 26th, 2016 at 9:56 am
I’ve been following your writings since Redemption and not once have I not loved what you write. You have a beautiful mind, Shamir and I hope you keep sharing it with us.
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November 29th, 2016 at 12:41 pm
That’s incredibly sweet of you, thank you 🙂
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